Bro you struck gold here. This was a chilling one. You paint the picture so well with your details here. I can see, and hear, and feel the heat and the cold weather and the negative effect from your subjects. Another brilliant piece 💎
If you haven't already, would definitely recommend checking out the Flash-Style, Flash Fiction movement on Substack as it definitely got the creative juices flowing for this piece
I thoroughly enjoyed this. Reading stories about drugs, violence and betrayal are my favorite and you wrote these flash fics so well. Are these connected in some way? I read them as different moments for a main character with the ending being the arrest at the party.
Hi Alex, thanks for reading! Yes, they are all interconnected. The woman drug dealer taken into custody in the first story is the same woman who broke out of jail and is on-the-run in the second story and then pops up at the end of the third story after her finding her ex-lover in Alexandria.
Ice cold 🥶 I felt that blue steel on my neck 😵 💀 when her lover gets merked. Some good ass second person story telling be really having you embodied in the characters. Great pic of Nas, that set the tone really well.
Yo!!!! I was wondering about the daughter! This was dope AF. I see you gotta continue it. I love the angle of the evolving story with the prompts for inspiration. So dope. Keep the story going!!!! This getting cinematic.
Tbh I’m content with leaving it as is because I feel that adding anything else would just dilute it
The only other thing that I wish I could have done was to add a mini-story about the daughter but I couldn’t find a way to satisfyingly write about her using the prompts available for this exercise
Understood. I'm super curious about what this would have looked like through the daughters lens. Through age, experience. I see space here for something completely unexpected. Great reads!
Whew, this is great storytelling! Prompt 1 was my favorite, but I enjoyed all 3! It may look different for each of us readers but your words really create a whole imaginative scene of what's going on throughout.
Thanks Amirah! Tbh that's been the goal with a lot of my storytelling (and why I try to avoid character descriptions as much as possible). It's so that people can fill in the gaps and picture a world that makes sense to them. The fun part, in this instance, is that all the short stories are interconnected so the scene you imagined in Prompt 1 can carry all the way through to Prompt 3
Ahhh, that makes so much sense and I love that! Wow, yesss!! When I got to Prompt 2 and read the line about getting the handcuffs off and then “Is it for the daughter you left behind, determined to follow in her mother’s footsteps?” in Prompt 3, my mind instantly went to that initial imagery I visioned while reading Prompt 1!
This was such a thoughtful, compelling, creative, and unique way to weave three totally separate disconnected prompts into three chapters of a cohesive narrative about the fates of our choices. To me, this is the power of post social media fiction: the conversation, the way the reader and the writer, the audience and the performer can change places, remix and slide together and define against each other in a way that the pre-social media fiction landscape could not. This was such a powerful way to show what we can all create together.
I wanna read more from prompt 2! That was appropriately bracing, chilling, and thrilling!
Man I’m like what happened next!
Thanks for reading! While Prompt 3 doesn't fill in the gaps it does reveal how this story ultimately ends 👀
This was cold brother
Loved these!!
Loved these stories !!
Bro you struck gold here. This was a chilling one. You paint the picture so well with your details here. I can see, and hear, and feel the heat and the cold weather and the negative effect from your subjects. Another brilliant piece 💎
Appreciate you reading bro 🙏🏾
If you haven't already, would definitely recommend checking out the Flash-Style, Flash Fiction movement on Substack as it definitely got the creative juices flowing for this piece
Bet, say less
Love all three of these
Thanks man, know this genre is more of your wheelhouse so I appreciate the feedback 👊🏾
I thoroughly enjoyed this. Reading stories about drugs, violence and betrayal are my favorite and you wrote these flash fics so well. Are these connected in some way? I read them as different moments for a main character with the ending being the arrest at the party.
Hi Alex, thanks for reading! Yes, they are all interconnected. The woman drug dealer taken into custody in the first story is the same woman who broke out of jail and is on-the-run in the second story and then pops up at the end of the third story after her finding her ex-lover in Alexandria.
That's awesome how you made separate prompts work together. This is really good!👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽
Ice cold 🥶 I felt that blue steel on my neck 😵 💀 when her lover gets merked. Some good ass second person story telling be really having you embodied in the characters. Great pic of Nas, that set the tone really well.
Thanks! Happy to hear that you enjoyed it. Yeah once I put that pic in, I knew that I had to come correct 😂👍🏾
dead ass that exactly what I was thinking, but you came with, you came with it 🙏🏽 lol
Yo!!!! I was wondering about the daughter! This was dope AF. I see you gotta continue it. I love the angle of the evolving story with the prompts for inspiration. So dope. Keep the story going!!!! This getting cinematic.
I really enjoyed the fill-in-the-blanks characterizations! Do you feel compelled to expand this story into a larger work or leave it as is?
Appreciate you reading 🙏🏾
Tbh I’m content with leaving it as is because I feel that adding anything else would just dilute it
The only other thing that I wish I could have done was to add a mini-story about the daughter but I couldn’t find a way to satisfyingly write about her using the prompts available for this exercise
Understood. I'm super curious about what this would have looked like through the daughters lens. Through age, experience. I see space here for something completely unexpected. Great reads!
Now updated with the daughter's story. Hope you like it!
Whew, this is great storytelling! Prompt 1 was my favorite, but I enjoyed all 3! It may look different for each of us readers but your words really create a whole imaginative scene of what's going on throughout.
Thanks Amirah! Tbh that's been the goal with a lot of my storytelling (and why I try to avoid character descriptions as much as possible). It's so that people can fill in the gaps and picture a world that makes sense to them. The fun part, in this instance, is that all the short stories are interconnected so the scene you imagined in Prompt 1 can carry all the way through to Prompt 3
Ahhh, that makes so much sense and I love that! Wow, yesss!! When I got to Prompt 2 and read the line about getting the handcuffs off and then “Is it for the daughter you left behind, determined to follow in her mother’s footsteps?” in Prompt 3, my mind instantly went to that initial imagery I visioned while reading Prompt 1!
This was such a thoughtful, compelling, creative, and unique way to weave three totally separate disconnected prompts into three chapters of a cohesive narrative about the fates of our choices. To me, this is the power of post social media fiction: the conversation, the way the reader and the writer, the audience and the performer can change places, remix and slide together and define against each other in a way that the pre-social media fiction landscape could not. This was such a powerful way to show what we can all create together.